Searria H.

Very capturing story! I agree with Swottielottie mostly. You need to watch your tenses sometimes. My English teacher always told us to vary our sentence beginnings. You tend to start ...

I wrote this at age nine in the beginning of the fourth grade. I recently took it back out and revised it a little bit. I want to publish it ...

Very, very nice for 11. I probably can't write something that well. I can see why your teacher gave you an A. I'm not much into poetry, but I really ...

Okay. Interesting story. I enjoyed the storyline. I just have a few spelling and grammar corrections. She went running up the stairs to the small , crampt room Hunter slept ...

Okay. Interesting story. I enjoyed the storyline. I just have a few spelling and grammar corrections. She went running up the stairs to the small , crampt room Hunter slept ...

Okay. Interesting story. I enjoyed the storyline. I just have a few spelling and grammar corrections. She went running up the stairs to the small , crampt room Hunter slept ...

Very interesting! I like the interactions between characters. I agree entirely with Avens Dolor. I just have a few small nitpicks. he was unaware he even interacted with others. He ...

Thank you very much! Most of the sentences you had a problem with were ones I was having trouble writing. Still, Kamir always won– almost always won – sort of. ...

I'm having a lot of trouble with this story, so any suggestions are absolutely welcome. Please be brutally honest. I need help!!! :cry: The Sadism Circus Kamir was not fond ...

Wow! Very interesting Story!!!! In answer to your questions: 1. I have never read any other stories about werewolves, but I don't think there are any out there like yours. ...

Chapter One No Other Choice The sweet smell of pine bedding reached my nose once again. I tried not to let it distract me. My owner had been to “busy” ...

I can guess which one snoink might want. :wink: These are all really interesting! I like yours, but J. Haux, my sister, drew my avatar and I want to keep ...

Wow, sort of sad huh? Was this supposed to be a free verse poem? I saw the rhymes, but I thought they were sort of in weird places. I don't ...

As I read through the poem the first time, I thought that the tone was sort of sad. The second time I read it, I found that the first stanza ...

I liked this! I have no clue what a sonnet is, but it was a wonderful poem all the same! I agree with Elizabeth. :D By the way, Happy birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(It's ...